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all a dream

follow a white rabbit
down the hole
meet a door
along the way
flying butter toast
chagrin of the cat
oh woe
a taste will make you big
a lick, small
all a dream
for Alice
one and all

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dragon of darkness

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  • pinksnowboots
    January 22

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    This is very interesting-it is so abstract but you can still tell what it is about. This definitely got me thinking, and I like that. Good job and thanks for entering!

    My fav lines

    all a dream
    for Alice
    one and all