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Ashleigh

She was to young to die, please tell
me why you took her from us why, you
shlould have left her here with her
friends and family!

It hurts so much to know that she
is not here anymore, I can't sleep, I
can't eat because you took her from
the people she loved most, she was
only 16.

She touched so many people that
when it was time to say good-bye
there were more than 300 people trying
to say good-bye to the one person
that lit up their lives.

It has been two months now and to
this day I'm still not over it, all
so fast, all so sudden, why her,
why nowm she had so much going
for her, so much love, so many people.

God please let her come back to
where she is needed most, no one will
be able to do what my cousin did for
so many, please just let her come back.

Your broke my heart when you made her
one of you own, and now my heart goes
on with so much pain, it won't let
it go, no matter what I do!

The last time I saw her was 7 years
ago, to find out that shes gone, just
makes my heart stop and makes me
want to fall to my knees and pray.

I know she is looking down on me,
as I sit here and write this, but
it's not the same as if she were here
in person.

All I really want is for the pain
to go away, but it won't for some
reason it hurts more than anything,
and if I let her go I know I
will always have her in my heart.

Now she is an angel and is still
helping me get through all the rough
times that are coming my way, she will
always be an angel looking down on
all of us.

Ashleigh we all love you and miss
you, I have not seen you for so
many years, but from the pictures I
could tell you have grown up to
be a avery wonderful and beautiful
young women.

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  • Sorry, I though you lost someone in death. It is common for people to think that God took loved ones away in death, but that's not so. Ecclesiastes 9:11 & 12 state:
    "time and unforeseen occurrence befall them all. For man also does not know his time. Just like fishes that are being taken in an evil net, and like birds that are being taken in a trap, so the sons of men themselves are being ensnared at a calamitous time, when it falls upon them suddenly."


    I must be tired now,
    Have a good night.


    • Mrs.Brosowsky666
      January 29
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      hey there

      Hey I had moved away for a while and it had been 7 years before I got to come back to find out that my 16 year old cousin had died in a really bad car accident and it was a few days before my birthday. I'm sometimes still having a hard time with it but I have my husband to help me out with it. Well I must be going so that I can bake for my hubby. If you want stop by my page and we will talk ok. See Ya

  • Mrs.Brosowsky666
    January 21
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    I had moved away for 7 years and I came back to find out that she was gone. That was very hard for me.