Heading down life’s highway
Driving to nowhere immediate
Speeding out of control
Descending sideways into a ditch
Tumbling over and over again
Approaching an unexpected stop
A twisted wreck of emotions
Broken, misplaced and confused
Losing faith in humanity
Don’t know what to say or do
Stumbling along the curb
Not knowing which way to go
Trying to shake the murkiness
And the darkness from my mind
Closely examining my emotions
To see if I am hurt in any way
The only damages are to my heart
Discarded like trash feeling used
Concluding that it is the end
Like a speeding car! You crashed
January 9, 2009
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Oh my goodness honey
Line 8 should end with** a lot **
line 10 should end with **you know **
Line 16 should be hurt **I cry**
last line You crashed You lose
My heart went out to you on this piece and I feel sometimes we feel like an automobile running out of control . A lost feeling and unwilling to talk with others to help you find your way .We hjave all experienced this and from experience I know I always so needed a friend or confidant to help me see more clearly the direction I so needed to go .
If this is a cry for help I am always here .I will be working a full time job here starting monday but will be on every afternoon after 5 talk to me I will do the best I can to help
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Seem to be going through a rough time lately. My seventeen year old stepdaughter moved in with us and everything has gone crasy. Its not easy . It is even effecting my six year old son Joshua. Thanks for reading this I really feel like were all going to crash and be hurt. I'm at a lost.
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Wow this is a great poem..I know that feeling..Great Job
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thanks so much for reading my poem.
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