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Lost

I got lost
in your eyes
then I feet
my sprit rise
and soar
like the wind
is it love
that I am in.

I got weak
in a glance
isn't this
what's called romance,
and now I know
because when I'm lost
I can't let go.

I don't mind not knowing
what I'm heading for
you can take me
to the skies
it's like being lost
in heaven
in your eyes.

I just fell,
don't know why
something there
we can't deny
and when I
first knew
was when I
looked at you.

And if I
can't find my way
if salvation
seems worlds away
oh I'll be found
when I'm lost in
your eyes.

I don't mind not knowing
what I'm heading for
you can take me
to the skies
it's like being lost
in heaven
in your eyes.

I got weak
in a glance
isn't this
what's called romance,
and now I know
because when I'm lost
I can't let go.

Author notes

This poem is to be a little dark but at the same time it shows love.

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  • DecorusApparatus
    February 5, 2009

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    This is seroiusly beautiful. Interesting structure and sweet language.
    Thankyou for entering this into my contest!
    --Stardust xx


  • Mrs.Brosowsky666
    January 21, 2009
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    I wrote this because I got lost in my husbands eyes and everytime I look at him I get lost just looking at him I see the deep love that he has for me.