Knowing your gone.
Knowing I'm coming undone.
I am here to stay.
I am here to say.
"I love you.
In everyway."
Bring me death.
Take my breah.
I'm feeling gray.
I'm not okay.
When I cry.
I make you whine.
When you scream.
I thought we were a team...
But now.
I bow down.
To death.
That took my breath.
You brought death.
I took my last breath.
Love=Death.
Death=Life.
I love death.
And so can you.
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yeah
sorta
on to something
accept reality dont let it bitch you
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sweet, witty, poetic, lovely, thank you
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wow this makes me speechless
i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!
great job!!!!
bravo
x-skylar-x
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This is pretty intense. I like it a lot. This has a really good flow to it. You need to write more shit.
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i love the awesomeness!!!
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Wow , this is very good. such powerful emotion. Intense writing. I can relate to this in a way I am going through something like that right now at the moment thanks so much for sharing this piece.
My favorite lines were
"Love=Death.
Death=Life.
I love death.
And so can you."
that's very brilliant. it sprites me.
good job and keep up the good work love to see more
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wow...i love this...beautiful...[speechless kind of]
well done!
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