Your softly spoken whisper
brushed my neck like a breeze
stimulating desire
your lips started to tease
sensative strong hands
lovingly caressed
tenderly slapping
silken milky flesh
nails bled seduction
along arched back
as our warm naked forms meshed
white against black
our eyes spoke of love
so deep and so true
fire pumping through our veins
our passion pushed through
raw and frenzied
tender and sweet
moist thighs clenched tight
as you thrust deep
worshipping each other
we became one
breathing in time
within each others arms
our crescendo began
as our emotions soared
bucking, writhing
into the night we called
our bodies a quiver
we shared a deep loving kiss
consumed by euphoria
in the throes of bliss
Author notes
Seduction, Silken, Crescendo, Whisper, Kiss, Thighs, Quiver, Lips, Desire, Passion.
A contest entry
- Valentines Seduction. by Poetryintheblood.
590 points, ended January 24, 2009, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow!
This is beautiful and well deserving of the gold! -
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Thank you Bruce
tis a pleasure to have you read and comment.
~sugar~
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Yes!
I like naughty ladies. LoL "our bodies a quiver
we shared a deep loving kiss
consumed by euphoria
in the throes of bliss"
Huzs & Slobber, Howard
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Great write. Very steamy and not at all trashy.
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Thank you for stopping by to read and comment
Valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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!!NAUGHTY!!
I LIKE... But now I have to take a break for a cold shower. Be Good, Howard
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Thank you Howard...sugar & spice me, always good
Appreciate you stopping by
~sugar~
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MORE THAN WORTHY OF THE GOLD - TO SAY THE LEAST!
It sounds to me like this one was written from a very recent experience, Baby! OH WHAT A LUCKY MAN the object of your desire and sweet and sensual fire must be! Thanks for sharing - as always - Sugar! I enjoyed the read as it passed me hardness test and well as the test of my gentle heart and soul. Way to go, Sweetie!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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Thank you sweet for your lovely comment.
That it was baby, and what a wonderful experience it was. Simply beautiful.
As always it is a pleasure to have you read and comment.
Love you Chelle xxx
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Thank you for your sensually beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Thank you for the gold.
All the best
~sugar~
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HOT! Hot! hot! and beautifully penned in a sweet erotic classic poem.....You have captured the essence of passon....that dwells in the souls of men & women...well written....an excellent read for the contest...with that golden quill, all our hearts you fill......novy
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Thank you so much novy for your lovely comment
valued and appreciated always
~sugar~
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Wow, hon this is beautifully erotic and sensual.
Very seductive, you could feel the build up of the moment, good luck with this contest
all the best
Emma
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Always a pleasure to have you read hon, glad you enjoyed
~sugar~
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Wow.
That was hot! Very seductive & erotic yet tastefully done. Good one, sis.
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Thank you bro for your fab comment, glad you enjoyed.
~sugar~
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