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my monster

i see you looking, and I'm looking back
why do i love you, when i hate you so much?
you stole all my friends, and killed them
and your plotting my death as i speak
now Ive lost my friends and family
and now all i have is you
you Chinese white monster

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  • icyrose
    January 31
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    sad, so so sad...

    The chinese white monster. I really like how you put that...

  • "and your plotting my death as I speak"

    I like that part(and the rest of course ) Awesome write.