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That Look... Into My Soul

Like spoiled magic

eyes connected


senses numbed


stolen
by desire



fleeing...

turning


I'm
entrapped....



again







Author notes

prompt ~ Twice in a lifetime

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  • Winwood
    August 25, 2009

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    Love this imagery...so few words that say so much...beautiful.


  • Angelflower
    January 27, 2009
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    this was short but beautifully written..

  • phoenixonfire
    January 26, 2009

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    LOVE IT!! I remember reading your poetry in other LB's contests and appreciating it! God I love your imagery!!

    Congrats on HM!

    ~pri


  • Lavender Butterfly
    January 22, 2009
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    descriptively captivating... x


  • maralisa silver member
    January 22, 2009
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    aw wow a brillant take on the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa

  • evelynxxoo
    January 21, 2009
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    trapped again but isnt love worth it very moving

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