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I fell for you

I fell in love with you
Now i dont know what to do
I told you once before
But i will never more

I fell in love with your smile
I fell in love with your heart
I fell in love with your mind
I fell in love with all of you

I fell in love with you
Now i dont know what to do
I told you once before
But i will never more


Everytime i see your picture
I think of the time we met
The way you made me feel
The shy look you gave me

I fell in love with you
Now i dont know what to do
I told you once before
But i will never more

When i think back
All i can do is smile
Our time was short
But i fell for you then

I fell in love with you
Now i dont know what to do
I told you once before
But i will never more


I know we cant be
That this must end
The feelings must stop
I must move on now

I fell in love with you
Now i dont know what to do
I told you once before
But i will never more



Author notes

Its been awile since i wrote nething had a bit of writers block but i wish i could write sumthing happy lol

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  • Sf
    June 21

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    'but I will never more' ... I don't know why it just doesn't go...

    suggestion: 'but I won't anymore?'... otherwise it's really good.

  • Lost Cause
    February 2

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    wow i really like this piece. i can't really critque it cuz im just getting back into writing but i still liked it. hehe i'm back.