Shinny, sparkly,
comfy too.
Thats the way
I like my Shoes!
Velcro,squeeky ,
pretty lace.
Can I walk there
without a trace?
Thats the way
I like my shoes!
Author notes
Option 3
A contest entry
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510 points, ended February 6, 29 entries
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Comments
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Really well done. I really really liked this one. It just had somthing special about it and made me smile
Very well done and thanks for the smile inducing entry
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FOR GOT PTS!
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I LUVED IT!The rhyme was inspirational!
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nice
I guess if your shoes are comphy the way you described shoes. Longs they are comfortable. I would wear them. It was different , but you are happy with your shoes, thats all that matters
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