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Flowers be striped as Girls

Thy rose is sweet. But smells of horrid disgust.
The striped ugliness of it befalls its origin.
Such they be so kind to as feel this lone creature.

A dark lonesome thing.
Lay away at night.
Striped.
Colors woven within each and everyone.

Another - be it different.
So gentle in its petals.
A young one - a girl.

Every female is a princess - a flower among all the rest.
Mine be sweet and beautiful and striped.
Different - alone.

Ratings go alone.
Frosted on. Every rainbow color.
Yellow be the main.

She will be cheerful, loving, loved...
Death be her passion.
A poet of great strength lasting on forever.

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    January 22, 2009

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    An interesting write that feels like i comes from your heart. Quite deep and emotional.
    Thank you for your entry.
    Gaylene