Stay with me the whole black night
Embrace my soul very, very tight
Gaze deeper than my hazel eyes
Show me love's rainbow skies...
For only you and me
can smell, hear, taste, feel and see
Beyond the colour blue
That pure love has a divine hue....
A contest entry
- ♪♪ Did you ever write a love song? ♪♪ by Rebekah-Ann.
700 points, ended February 3, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So Lovely
This was such a delight to read. Love the rhyme. Take care, Sandy
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Oh I love this and can even feel the tighness of the embrace. Very emotional piece! Great piece well written!
Becks
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Intense yet tender feelings come with this write..The intensity is the love felt in the lines, the tenderness in the invitation to look into each others eyes...
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aaaaah I can relate to this... I have hazel eyes too
and my boyfriend has blue eyes...
A divine hue, You painted such a beautiful love scene here!!
Thank you for your time and for writing a fresh poem for this contest!
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Beautiful invitation ...
and with Valentine's day near, many may relate to the sentiments in a global togetherness ...
Love
Myra
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