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Ruthless Disobedience

Diet books piled around.
Doctors warnings filling my ears.

 

How can something so good

Be so bad?

 

Who cares?

I smile.
Push it all away.
Give into temptation.

Warm, liquid chocolate.
Envelope me.
Comfort me.

Dark brown love,
That's what I want.

Little squares of perfection:
Come to me.

I've given into life.
Rich life.

And I'm never going back.

Author notes

Random, I know. Odd, I know. Strange, I know.

I want chocolate SOOOO BADLY now!!!! *dies*

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 26

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    That's how I feel about chocolate too Nice!!!
    I want it now tooooooo... gah!



  • AbidoodleCullen
    January 25
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    Haha!
    Thanks for entering and good luck!
    <3 Abi


  • StarIlluminated
    January 24

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    Haha Katrina, I didn't notice you were writing for a contest. I was like, wow, she REALLY wants chocolate.......haha but now I get it.

    I <3 chocolate with all my <3.

    *KT*


    • liduen silver member
      January 24
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      Because I'm obviously that obbsessed (actually....I am)

      Thanks for the comment


  • checkmate-
    January 23

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    *drools* I...want...chocolate!

    Strange, yes. Odd, yes. Awesome, yes. I love this poem!

    -Paradox

    AND

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