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Older Valentine

Im too young for you
and you dont care.
You only want me
and thats not fair.

I call you my brother
you call me your sis.
I dont have feelings for you
is it something i missed?

I tell you i love you
but i dont mean it like that.
You say you love me too
but just to be exact.

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  • poet2angels gold member
    January 23, 2009

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    Thank you for entering and sharing your feelings for this person
    Have a happy Valentine's Day

    Lynda