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Her Loving Eyes

Like stars that glimmer each night,
so does the magic in your eyes.
Bringing forth such passion that does excite,
such affection that our hearts never denies.

Those eyes that stare with loving grace,
as I find myself lost within them within one glance.
Longing for our lips to meet in a passionate embrace,
as we are swept away within our sensual romance.

Those eyes show such passion to me,
making me feel so alive.
Love for her that I do decree,
each moment together happiness I shall strive.

Those eyes of a sea of heavenly green,
setting free the love my heart does hold.
Nothing shall come between us to intervene,
enveloped within the pleasures our love does behold.

Those eyes of my lady fair
sees much in me, more than I truly know.
Showing me how much she does care,
and all that her heart does bestow.

Those eyes of her showing me such love,
as our lips embrace in a passionate kiss.
She is an angel sent from the heavens above,
showing me love's true bliss.

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  • poet2angels gold member
    January 23, 2009
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    Lovely rhyme and flow and such sweet devotion
    Have a Happy Valentine's Day!

    Lynda