It is hope that lifts these wings,
as you unveil the beauty of life from new heights.
I am forever insignificant and forever precious.
The colors of love wrap me so secure,
I shall never fear falling.
Gentle as the breeze, I hear your voice calling.
So beautiful, its music heals.
I can only hope my faith shall take me higher.
Author notes
I was afraid to add more. It might take away from the message. I do hope this is okay. And btw, I always find myself coming back to your contests because that truly do inspire!
A contest entry
- I am a bird ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended February 4, 2009, 18 entries
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Comments
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awesome
I LOVE IT!!
i love how you made it seem so real like putting in "the colors of love wrap me so secure"
great job on this poem
plz comment my poems if you can
thnk you
~yasmine~ -
Insignificant enough to receive the power to fly...loved it. Blessings.
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Indeed it is the faith which lead us to the Almighty..very thoughtful strucutre is here..my thanks for the entry..well done...
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