Choking on the air I breathe,
eyes see the fog surrounding;
legs deteriorate underneath pressure.
Will power to survive;
falters.
Author notes
the prompt: fire.
20 poets
20 words
A contest entry
- quickie III - fire by Salty Hibiscus.
400 points, ended January 21, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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This is very powerful! The last line was absolutely perfect! Great job and congrats on the HW.
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wonderful take on the prompt. i can feel your poem very much - hard to push it away. powerfully written. thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest.
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Wow! What a great take on the prompt! This is amazing! I love the feel to this one! Fantastic!
Best of luck in this contest!
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