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How can I let you do this??

You can be the cause
For the geeky smile
Which once
I thought you’d never cause

You can be
And you are
The person that fills my mind
Full of thoughts of you day and night

But you’re also
The same person
That causes a small but yet another
Little crack in my already glued back together heart

You’re the person
Who every time he opens his mouth
Causes tears to well in my eyes
And confusion which could last a lifetime

And you may well be the person
Who I can’t walk away from
But you’re most certainly the person
Who is slowly and surely breaking my heart.

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A mixture of:

6) A poem on Love.

and

8) A poem on how you've ever had your heart broken.

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  • morgana raven
    January 25, 2009

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    But you’re also
    The same person
    That causes a small but yet another
    Little crack in my already glued back together heart

    I lvoe this bit, especially after the nice lead up.
    Great write xx
    Laura


  • Jaffa-
    January 25, 2009

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    Very nice poem. Very sad. I've been through this myself and it's not too awesome is it. It takes years of practice but i'm an expert with my glue stick Nice write, well done. xo