I hate myself
Not for what I do
Nor for what I say
It is my cowardliness
For what I can not say
What I can not do
Because I can not tell you
That I love you
To feeble to bear rejection
To hear you say the words
I fear so much
Those six words
So absurdly terrifying
It would break my heart
If you uttered them
"I just want to stay friends..."
I loath myself
For not being advantageous enough
To confide the truth
That I love you
My best friend...
Author notes
Option 10- Why I hate myself
A contest entry
- Odd........(CLICK ME) by Jaffa-.
510 points, ended February 6, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think. I would really love some constructive criticism. Thanks
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i can connect to this so well
i love this poem
such a common feeling put so deeply
nothing wrong with it to me -
I really loved this. Very very nice. I can get where your coming from, it hurts when you have to see that person everyday and smile and laugh like it doesn't hurt, knowing that you will never be strong enough to tell them how you feel. Very nice write. Thanks for the great write.
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
It means alot to mean, to have someone understand
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