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Slipping Away

Haze

Blur

Everyday's the same

 

Working toward an invisible goal

Don't even know what I'm doing

 

Today

Yesterday

Last week

All the same

Just going through the motions

 

And I'm slowly falling

 

Asleep

Awake

No difference

 

Slowly

slipping

away

 

Wasting my life away

 

I remember

joy, sorrow,

wanting things

 

But everything stopped

I ceased to care

after everything left

 

Slowly

slipping

away

 

Memories run together

Future...

Don't care

Past...

already happened

Present...

the same

 

Maelstrom of images

And I'm sinking, drowning

 

Slowly

slipping

away

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  • Quietgirl17
    January 23

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    Whoa this is really awesome. I mean for some reason I can really relate. This is great, keep on writing.


  • eternitydemon
    January 21
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    I'm amazed by this. the emotion seems to seep out of it and into my soul. You did a great job! Good Write!