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Nothing to Lose

Feels like I'm running

blindly

Through an army

spears poised

 

They thrust, and stab

but I don't care

My blood pours

and I don't feel

 

All that matters

is what lies ahead

My life's already

been taken

 

So on I run

with only one hope

For one last glimpse

of everything I care

 

I have little to gain...

but nothing to lose

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    January 22
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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    Your last words are an excellent, strong conclusion.
    To run towards something is not often what we seem to be doing, but it is exactly that

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  • honey bear
    January 21

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    a very creative and expressive write, thank you for sharing this with us sometimes we all feel as though we have nothing to lose..sometimes nothing is exactly what we need but we dont realise it. .