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He Is To Blame

The one you love
At least once a week
Praise him
Believe in him
Let him save you
Then blame him for it all
You  lost your loved one
Blame god
Your childhood was lived in ashes
Blame god
Your terminal illness
Blame god
You are loved by no one
Blame god
No matter what
You always have a choice
And to blame him
Was your choice
You are not wrong
You can't be at fault
But you praise him
Believe in him
Shower him with love
And expect to go to heaven
How dare you

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  • Tzipora
    May 30

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    bravo!times3

    woow, im shocked i could never get that thought out in words even if i wanted to...

    i can honeslty say i do that. good write though


  • Til the Day I Die
    February 28
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    Hmm I like thIs it's really good and I sadly say I've done this before but still good write


  • Guerrero
    January 22
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    very true.. its his light that sheds darkness

  • Bob Fox
    January 21

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    well

    I guess we do blame our God at times. tis human I think even for non-believers. Well stated poet. But damn I thought we all blamed Bush for everything now. lol