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Monstrosity

I wish I could show you the images in my head
Project them on a screen
Or paint the ugly scene
Beautiful
Twisted

Disgusting

You love me

You love me?

Empty fields with beach
Sandy from decay
Black water lapping at the edges
And fields of razor wire sway

Your body naked, still
Fingers trail and stain
Golden lashes shut
To keep my monsters at bay

You love me?

You love me

Decaying

Asphixating

Demon
Monster
Or another ugly thing
Its all inside my head
I would say thats how it seams

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  • AnthonyDeMaria
    January 28
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    Interesting. The best place to let the monsters run and play is on paper. That keeps mine from pulling at my ear lobes. LOL. I liked it. PeAcE


  • Ich schreie schreie
    February 18, 2009

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    This is beautiful; reaching an understanding through poetry is a fascinating and rare thing. It's, associative...


  • hawkeslake gold member
    January 21, 2009

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    How wonderful and sometimes difficult to accept being loved in spite of how awful or unworthy we feel ourselves! Isn't it great that someone loves us anyway!!! This is really well-done, with excellent examples of this heartfelt question.