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Since God made you an angel...

At the end of this month
It’ll be 19months
19months
Since God made you an angel

And even though
It’s coming up for
2years since you left us
I can still recall so much

I remember the time
You turned round and once randomly said
“Bec do you know it’s out of fashion to wear your jeans so low”
I’d never laughed so much

I remember the times
You used to laugh like mad
At Ben and I competing
“No she loves ME more”

Nearly 2years on
All of those things
And sadly you
Are now just a memory.

Author notes

AP name: xbecx

Inspiration: My Nan. She died of cancer 2yrs ago this summer.

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  • BadBlood
    January 23, 2009
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    I love how you related death to such an honorable being, an angel. I recall a poem of mine that I crafted by using the same poetic element. The memory you have of your Nan defies both space and time in this composition. Thank you so much for entering! Good luck.