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Arriving at Truth

As human puppets,
We are taught to yearn for truth,
Then why is it when confronted,
We run,
Hide,
Fight,
I have seen truth,
The glorious brilliance,
Loving all encompassing,
The light which makes blind see,
Deaf hear,
Dead live,
In this magnificence I am afraid,
Why?
Simple,
Something so pure,
So honest,
Flies in the face of the past,
I will never give up,
I feel the happiness,
Love,
Joy,
All which she has shown me,
Perhaps the fear that is felt,
Is not that its true.

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  • Arabella
    January 26

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    Interesting.

    found a possible grammer mistake in the last line. "is not that its true" doesn't make much sense as it exists. Truth is rarely, if ever, beautiful, let alone anything like you describe.


  • Desire gold member
    January 21

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    Wow~

    Oh My Damien this is one Powerful piece You have versed and I read several times- each line pulled me in but also grabbed~
    the words:
    I have seen truth,
    The glorious brilliance,
    Loving all encompassing,
    Excellent~ Message tugs
    Happy to see Your quill dancing Precious~

    Love this!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes always
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~