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*sigh*

Everything's so overwhelming
Trying to make people happy
And yet you are so miserable
Trying to still be true to yourself
But failing everytime
Trying to do well in school
Having to take care of a family
No time to do things peacefully
Feeling like a total failure
No one's proud of what you've done
No one's thankful
You feel like you want to disappear
Just to see how they would be if you left

Author notes

I really felt like shit and needed a vent. I know this poem sucks

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  • liveyourlife27
    January 21, 2009

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    its a really great one. it reminds me so much of me. i never really realized how alike we are.....yeah. Im always here for you if you need me