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Astounding

This is life
Right before us
Dropping with the sunset
Going down
We had yet to grasp the light right ahead of us
Going down
Down

You live in my heart
But nothing is forever
And such ideals are so astounding
But it keeps me from embracing the beauty of life

Such things dance around me
Even in light I still can't see a thing

Though you live in my heart
No sun has ever enlightened my sight
And nothing is forever 

Author notes

I've had the line "you live in my heart but nothing is forever" stuck in my head for a while now. I just didn't have anything to write around it.

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