Sharp cold wind rushing through my hair
the wind roars everywhere
I'm almost blown away
the wind swirls around me
I feel like a tornado swirling every where
That's what it is like out there
A contest entry
- Ages 12 and under: Wind Chills! by Sky Prince Ireland.
900 points, ended February 9, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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gold congrats on that .. well u descibed the day outside here today pr,,fectly only i didnt go outside in it this is fine work and i didnt get a prize in poetry till i was like 54c which was 2 weeks ago so your doing mighty fine already chere god son from godfather glenn always at you servive k @@ thats an aussie hand shake and a high five.
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wow, this is fantastic and bravo for your gold trophy a well deserving one! i know iv read before but its great to see your still writting, take care and look forward to the next one x
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Impressive! Quite wonderful for someone of such a young age.
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wow
wow you know for a little brother your damn goodd joel wow im impressed xx
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ooh this makes me want to hold on to my hat!!
welldone you have given lots of imergery in this poem, your developing really well,
good luck in the contest mew2!!
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I know what you mean, mew. Many people I'm sure can echo what you're saying here. Nicely done, my friend. Thanks for entering; good luck.
Brian -
I liked how you rythmed this without making it forced. Really beautiful wording and it's so deep. Good luck in the contest.
Much love
~Noor
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