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What An Intensity!!!

Desires are Burned
Souls are Cleansed
It never tires
Creates a Fear
to the eye of the Demon
OH!! Wise Fire!!!!

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  • Salty Hibiscus gold member
    January 21
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    great take on the prompt. i wish you good luck in my contest and thanks for sharing.