Warm paradise
feathery petals alive
my perfection
is your little flaws
Fantasy's linger
weaving among your freckles
singing of love
and life to come
Sunshine melting
through the clouds
cannot compare
to promised dreams
fluttering under
warm wove cotton
Softness begging tears
of individual beauty
inch by inch
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I like the third stanza....
very nice.....sort of had a Beatles feel to it....
obsession....very poetic word...
conjures up immense desire...
very good lass.
Liam
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CUTE!!!
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ah, thats a lot of green. sorry
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