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Heart on Fire

Scorching light
fill my eyes with ash.
They fall in silence,
so strike another match.
It shall be in vain.

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tehe.

A contest entry

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  • Salty Hibiscus
    January 21, 2009

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    teehee. imagery is good, and i can see it in my brain - strike a match and be drawn to the fire itself. nice job. good luck in my contest.