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if this is what's called love [you have my entire heart]


i am the girl you think you have figured out
    and really
you don't know a thing sweetie.

at least i thought you didn't but you always know when i am at my worst.
and the thing i love most, is that you always care. no matter what you're always in my head. living there and you made your home and i never want you to leave.

[atleastnotmentally]

and physically you walk away with the illusion of my heart in your hands that are shoved in the pockets of you polyester.
& you may not see it.
but i do.

it almost hurts to breathe with the way that i love you.
but i know you'll be there to connect the oxygen to my lungs and pump the blood back into my idiotic heart.

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Comments

  • This was an excellent piece
    Your emotions were expressed very well
    and the imagery that came from them was well penned

    Great work


  • Bohemianwriter
    February 6

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    wow this was amazingg, i actually was feeling heartache reading this, cause u was describing everything perfectlyy.
    awesome really.


  • L.Jay
    February 2
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    lovely.