I saw a relection in my eye
Of a long and feathery world
It was woven with very great detail
It was dark and thick and curled
I blinked just once and the forest swayed
And gracefully fell into place
At each individual I looked as I layed
And was amazed at the incredible grace
That God, so great and powerful
Had designed such a delicate thing
As each little soft, dark eyelash
The praises forever I'll bring
Author notes
A poem about eyelashes 
A contest entry
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I really like this. So beautifullly spoken about a subject I've never given a second thought until now. God truely does have an amazing and creative mind. Thank you for entering. Please do not respond until contest is over and judged. Good luck.
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Aww this was very beautiful.
I like the visuals you convey
and the honesty.
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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Thank you
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haha, this was a super-cute poem. I think you're the only person I know that would think to write a poem about eyelashes. nice job. <3
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Wow this was really great. I really liked this one. Very beautiful. How can you take something so random and make it into something so beautiful. Great write. Thanks for the lovely entry. xo
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Interesting indeed! Everything in this world, God is so talented! I never thought of an eyelash so deeply as you have!
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Thank you
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WOW!!! This is so creative and beautiful. I love love love this! Great job and good luck!
God Bless
♥ Kathraina
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Thanks =D
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