I
We made friendship bracelets
from pink and green wool
and wound a strand of hair
through each for good luck
II
She was the colour in my dreams
the creases in my palm and the
years spilling over my pale skin
III
He didn’t need to run
head first into the brick wall
to know rejection would hurt
IV
The triangle has sharp
points; one for each person
in the relationship,
even though a mountain
is visible at every angle,
one side is always lonely.
V
He smiled at her.
She didn’t notice, but I did.
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This is really great. I really liked everyone of these. Especially...well...especially all of them actually.
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Wow~
I really enjoyed this descriptive piece of wisdom inscribed in poetry form.. I like this part a lot, just something I can personally relate to, and believe many can.
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even though a mountain
is visible at every angle,
one side is always lonely.
Brilliant, and thanks for sharing here.
Keep up the wonder of you!
Peace, Timothy
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Awesome
An awe inspiring peice...I has so much feeling, and so much meaning. I would not change a word.
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Brilliant write ! I would not change a word you've written here , your sentiments - are very clear !
Splendid read !! Friend Easy
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Another amazing write by you.
This feels similar to my situation at the moment.
My best friend has gotten a boyfriend recently,
And it seems as though she never has time in her life for me anymore...
I loved the metaphor in part II
And I loved III also.
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