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Never Sad, Always Glad, Because You've Always been my Dad

Dad, I can tell you're very proud.
Your eyes said it aloud.
As I grow every year,
I face this one edgy fear.
The fear of you facing anxiety,
That might lead me to sobriety.
It doesn’t matter how far we are apart.
As long as your name is tattooed in my heart.
As a child, you taught me the right things to do.
The best father I know is you.
Daddy, you need to promise me one thing.
Even though, I am very grateful with the joy you always bring.
That if one day I become a bride,
You'll always be there by my side.
I promise I will also abide.
Thank you dad, for every little thing you did.
This is from your grateful, beloved kid.

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  • mayari
    January 21
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    yeaa this took me less than 10 minutes to write lool!! enjo