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Wild Orchid

Jazz whispers melancholic, her rhythmatic sway conceals a serene rage.  
Artistic charm, seductive haze align her slim physique.
Charismatic gaze compels submission as a corrupted sage
Kiss, dove of untamed virtue, lips converge to unveiled mystique.
Incense intoxicates, fragrant skin invokes melodious dreams.
Erotic orchid, delicate beauty that I adore.

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  • Emmyb gold member
    May 16

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    this is so beautiful. I wish it were a little more spaced out so I could truly enjoy each word with ease. its a magnificent piece anyway. well done here. Iam surprised you have not entered this into anything.


  • hisaddiction
    April 29
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    this is really sexy! love it!


  • jazzcat gold member
    March 29

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    Sweet and powerful in its brevity, flowing with the strength of a waterfall, carrying the reader all the way, totally unharmed. This is sensual and vibrant...anything that starts with "Jazz whispers melancholic..." is great. I like this style. Keep up the good work.


  • Theneva
    March 15
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    gorgeous

    lovely sensual poem... very nicely said... superb imagery.

  • Judith Chandler
    January 30

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    A beautiful lady, lots of detail. I like the lips which "converge to unveiled mystique" and "fragrant skin invokes melodious dreams." Vivid wording here.

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