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Even In Darkness

Missing image
Unforgivable bizarre beauty
of angelic emotions
no longer hidden from
searching eyes...
suffering lingering existence
of man's desires;
trapped within passion.

Hands fathom her softness
lips slanted o'er penetrating
sweetness; clinging as
bells of Hades start ringing.

Beneath dark beastly clouds
temptation smiles.
Chained frowzy, observed
in heated purgatory
their souls departing,
tears starting.

Hearts beating in unison
spirits  embraced
He spoke across her ear:
"Thrice a sinner; only once heathen
even in darkness; I Love Thee."


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  • azlyn gold member
    April 15

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    Dark and lovely. I love this pic...you certainly caught the depth of it with this write.

    "Thrice a sinner; only once heathen
    even in darkness; I Love Thee."

    This is outstanding indeed!

    Thank you for sharing this and blessings to you.

    Az

  • this is beautifully well written. thank you for sharing it with me today. congratulations on the honorable mention you have earned and i will be looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie


  • carebear123
    February 8

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    I love this! i never read a poem like this. it was refreshing. i like it alot. very clever. i also loved the words you used. Your a very skilled writer. I love this poem! im not usually a fan of erotica, but i think dark poetry mixed with erotica is pretty neat. Thanks to you!


  • ladyjae
    February 3
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    passion, desire, and pain all rolled into one. beautiful


  • PastelMoons gold member
    February 3

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    This was worth the wait!
    gorgeous
    Thanks for entering

    ~Pastel


  • Draig aine gold member
    January 25
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    OH YES

    dark and delicious


  • ApollosMuse
    January 24
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    very passionate..this was visually stunning!!loved it!!


  • onesugar gold member
    January 22

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    Fantastic, I loved this from beginning to end, darkly sad, but so passionate.
    Good luck with this fab piece
    ~sugar~


  • PastelMoons gold member
    January 21
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    I am looking forward
    to reading you.

    ~Pastel

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