A Narrow Precipice
©copyright 2009 Bonita M Quesinberry
Along a narrow precipice, I moved cautiously:
a child's trek down Grand Canyon's donkey trail.
I walked not alone: Satan slinked surreptitiously
between the rough wall and this body frail.
He struck with precision, ever so tenaciously.
His blow sent me headlong to hardened shale.
Death stills a future tongue, he grinned impetuously.
You will not win this round either, Satan,
for I belong to Christ and I have already won.
He didn't see God reach out and send me on my way;
the trek no less dangerous as I grew,
but my Father knows Satan will come another day.
The path was trickier as hard winds blew
while, again, Satan prepared to make a final play;
but God's steady hand readied, for He knew.
Diseases can still her tongue, Satan summed up my pay.
You will not win this round either, Satan,
for I belong to Christ and I have already won.
So many times he struck; sure it was successfully.
He was blind to God's stance at the cliff's edge.
I rose up repeatedly and would speak truthfully,
walking the talk where rivals lined the ledge
unaware that Father protected me faithfully.
Vile soldiers lobbed pharaoh's four-sided wedge.
"More blows to her head 'til dead," they shouted willfully.
You will not win this round either, Satan,
for I belong to Christ and I have already won.
Nothing is working, Satan crossly calculated;
thus, he engaged medical, hearth and house:
Ruling agencies can kill, he deliberated,
and each lie made it appear I'm a louse.
Blind to God at my side, I was exonerated;
still they fight, firm that his fire not be doused.
Get her on the streets! Dumb, but they capitulated.
You will not win this round either, Satan,
for I belong to Christ and I have already won.
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Here is a poem from when I backpacked into the grand canyon at 16. I didn't see satan, though...
Where are the scriptures that show that the beauty of nature is an invitation to seek God? -
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Perhaps you don't understand the concept of metaphor: the reference to Grand Canyon was a metaphor used to indicate the dangerous trail we walk through this life. Nature was created by God and I've known Him most of my life and the only reason I'm still alive today. Thank you for stopping by to comment.
BonnieQ
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Wow. This is really wonderful. Very powerful! Thanks for entering my contest. I'm always honored when someone takes the time to write for me.
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Wow... I really like this. It gives hope, and tells that Satan can do whatever he may like, but in the end, God is still there to catch us when we fall.
the faith you have is quite obvious through this poem, and it is truly inspirational to see that through all of those things you still remain at God's side. He is always at our side, it is us who choose to wander away from Him. Silly silly sheep are we...
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Thank you so much, hon, for the uplifting review. Indeed, God always is there for us and we will know it if we but pay attention. Satan has spent my life trying to kill me but he never will win against God's strength and power. I am so blessed, though unworthy, to have been chosen as one of His handmaidens. Again, thank you. . . Oh! And, thank you for adding me to your Favs List. What an honor you bestow upon me.
Luv & hugs, BonnieQ
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Thank you for writing inspirational things that make me want to add you! I'm going through a bit of a rough time right now and right now I'm just trying to remember that He's there. It's hard and I keep forgetting. I'm trying to remember by writing at least two or three poems amidst my hectic college schedule (7 classes a day, too many a week) and the other activities I'm involved in. It gets easier when I can find people who have been through trials and survived, with an even stronger faith than before.
I suppose it's like Mother Theresa said "I know God will not give me more than I can handle--I just wish He didn't trust me so much." -
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I know exactly how Mother Theresa felt. I've been in a battle with Satan for the last year and a half; BUT, I know God will give me a break before it's too late.
Just remember those two repeating lines in "A Narrow Precipice." Every time Satan attacks, I say those lines and everytime God is there and at just the right time He moves that old Devil out of the way.
Know that I am here for you and that you can contact me anytime you wish.
Much love in Christ, BonnieQ 
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I so agree! It's others sharing their stories of survival of whatever that encourage us when we are going through trials and tribulations or just tough schedules!
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very nice
We walk with God at our side and it is easier to travel the path when we know the end of the destination. I am always taken by your writes and knowledge of our Father. You are a light along the path for me and your glow warms my heart. I love you so, my Sister, bubba
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Ah, my Bubba Tony! You are too kind to me. Still, thank you so much for the uplifting words, as you know I do need them from time to time.
Much love and hugs, SisBon 
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Wonderful!
I love the way you have done this, the deep un-faultering faith you show in this - so strong, steadfast. You are surely blessed - and such an inspiration to others.
Wonderful write! best wishes in your contest.
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Wow!
Great story poem with wonderful flow, imagery, detail & words that capture the reader! A read to have one reflect on His tender mercies & protection no matter what prevails! Love this. 
The fact that each stanza is seven lines exactly [the number of perfection] & that you follow each with :
You will not win this round either, Satan,
for I belong to Christ and I have already won.
makes for such a fitting write of praise to Him!
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Thank you, Sis. AND, thank you for pointing out that the stanzas are seven lines. I had not really noticed, yet I am so pleased for our Lord's perfect number. The thing that amazed me, in all the years of research and study, is that His number appears so many times in ways most people have never noticed: i.e. seven steps of grace, seven points of faith, seven reasons healing of the flesh might not be gained. . . on and on and on! GOD IS GOOD AND WISE!
Much love and hugs, SisBon
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Bravo!
Just loved the battle and the words that you used after each attack...wonderful write. Blessings.
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Thank you, Denise! Those two lines I have said over and over during the years. I recall the day I went down with the brain aneurysm. I said those words aloud as I sank to the deck, and when I could not get up and into the house I told the Lord He would have to do it for me. HE DID!
Luv & hugs, SisBon
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