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teach to learn

no matter how much i know i have a lot to learn
the more knowledge i feed, the more knowledge i yearn

teaching someone what i learn
becomes a constant concern

because one day it will be their turn
and to who will they turn
if i am not there when they turn?

so the more i teach the more i learn
as simple as my braincells burn

my knowledge is still on point

remembering early childhood lessons off the dome
or getting the answer from the google home

to teach is to learn something new myself

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  • PoeticSoul4U
    January 21
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    This one I like, you deff have to watch the syllable counts but the piece overall was good.


    • ruby81272
      November 23
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      what is your problem??

      why are you so anal about syllable count, i could tell you are not a classically trained poet because all you do is focus on syllables??? when you write poetry you express yourself you do not constrain yourself to syllables.....fuck outta here with that shit.....