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Let Me Die...

A dance with death
I want to
you can't keep me here anymore
I want to be released!
just let me go...
I beg you
don't tell me you need me here
you know its a lie
my life means nothing to anyone
I don't want it
all I want is to die
to be forgotten
because I'm use to being alone
I'm use to hearing that I'm worthless
and now I truly believe it
so let me go please...
I don't want to feel anymore

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1/20/09

Say What You Want, If it's hurtful u'll be ignored

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  • purplemoon
    January 20, 2009

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    BRAVO!!

    This is a truly emotional poem and I don't even know you but your not worthless No one is. This poem has a good flow it is very eye catching. The way you worded it it just fit. You did well.