losing her fantasies awake
cries getting desperate
dreams getting darker
and soon she will forget
old scars blend with new
one pain dulls another
blood stain getting larger
happiness getting further
screams muffled by her casket
fall upon deaf ears
she never noticed
the silence after the tears
A contest entry
- All you can be? by Erozay.
550 points, ended February 3, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this ones got a creepy and eerie touch to it ..........i LOVE IT!! XD
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sounds like your narrating
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I love endings like this Such endings take over the poem (and the reader.) This will stick in my mind for some time. Thank you.
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