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I can't feel it- less than 5 minute write

I can’t feel it
Why can’t I feel this?
I can see it.
The skin ruffled and raised
Loose and a little off
A straight line
A little red coming to the surface
I’m shaking.
I don’t know why
I still can’t feel it.
I make more.
There’s more red now
Bubbling up along the straight line
Ah I’m starting to feel it now
10 later
Warmness
There and washing over my whole body
Relief
Thank god

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Written in less than 5 minutes without revision.

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