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The Artist’s and Poet’s Dilemma



Why must we suffer so much heartache
and unbearable loneliness or
the emptiness of a barren existence
that brings us to the pit
of hopelessness and despair
so that we may be inspired ----

to create ?




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  • Redstormy gold member
    January 22

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    Oh man

    You have no idea how well I relate to this,
    being a chronic solitude seeker.. I'm have a similar
    day today myself. Then even when we are with people we feel disconnected somehow anyway.
    Seperate... it's the way our minds work

    Love this my friend


  • suseann
    January 22
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    Awh! So true. This cries out to be savored thoughts for consideration. I suppose to show the many naunces of living,you must first live. Don't wack off any earlobes please. Surprised And live you must. The world needs such a light to warm it etched,slathered on canvess,swirled starlight and or penned with your quill.