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My Dream of her

She comes to me in the night
filling my senses with the wonder
of her beauty and grace.

Her long gown flowing in the breeze
like the petals from a fragile flower
floating to the ground.

Nearer to me she comes and
I look deeply into her beautiful eyes
and see the very depths of her being.

Reaching out to hold her lovely face
between my two hands
I gently kiss her parted lips.

Comes the dawn
I awake

and she is gone.

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  • hey charlie
    April 11
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    This is a very beautiful write. Thanks for entering.


  • Bunny luv26
    April 5
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    Wow this was really good. Nice visual and a good flow. Thank you for entering my contest!


  • LadySerenity
    January 29

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    this is beautiful. dreams are sometimes so much better then reality. This is a lovely write.
    ~*Lady Serenity


  • suseann
    January 23

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    Can anything real outside the dream state begin to compare? This is a good free verse. Something I'm not very good in doing.And it's a lovely tale also.