I taste your honeyed love
when I kiss your lips of desire
sinfully intoxicating sex
like drugs pleasure now
helplessly loosing the moments
in the tempos’ rhythmic beat
our bodies bump
and shoulders shuffle
to impish undertones
seeping deeply into me
Your stare a wandering breeze
gently blowing through me
looking for weakness
to use against me
discovering artless virtue
for your corrupt leisure
Author notes
thank you to rksauer72 who took the feeble first attempt and turned it into magic
xoxo
Any ideas on how I can flesh this out more and make it stronger?
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Very good!
Short and sweet ... do u want to keep this a similair length or are you willing to draw this one out a bit? This is a lot of strenght to it. I do like it!
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id like to make it a little bit longer but i dont nkow where it is going at the moment
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