my cinnamon eyes follow the trail
of hurt your words leave behind.
they swirl around my head and disappear
into my chest and I'm dizzy with the
concoction between us.
everytime you say you love me
I nearly die from the irony.
because there's a dotted and
dashed line separating our boundaries
and they are clearly written
in invisible ink in your eyes.
our eyes align and
she wouldn't like this
you smirk. and I know this
all too well. know how you
play this twisted game.
[it's all a game to you]
and I'm merely your contortionist
p a w n.
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1st off good luck in the other contest 2nd this was a really cool poem i hope this isn't a true story but if it is i am here for you alot of guys love to play mind games i was with one once he was an asswhole he was always beeting on me and i tolk it because of my stepson thats a long story i will tell you if you would like then there was my dad who beat on me all the time ontil one day i decided to commit suicde by sitting on a fire for 3 hours i didnt get burnt or die some people say i had an angel looking out for me well anyway i got anough corrage to tell my dad how it was and that i wanted to go live with my mom thanks for sharing this poem remember if you ever need someone to talk to i will be her
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Wow.
I'm so sorry.
:/
I hope you never have to resort to that again, no one deserves any of it.
Thank you, though.
And yeah, it was a true story, but not about abuse.
At least not physical.
Thanks again(:
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you love him and he wants you to fallow his lead, his commands, you seem to be his puppet, his play thing and he does things that you know nothing about but that he knows you would hate... just some thoughts.
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some excellent imagery here.love the idea of words written in invisible ink.yes people can use each other in love's game you need to find someone who is playing for real.
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wow
This is a great write good job, keep it up
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I loved this poem. I love how you lay your emotions out so honestly!
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This is brilliant!
I love how intense and angry this is!
It's hard for me to write about anger unless I'm feeling it. So unless you had a terrible day today, you're super talented at expressing emotions without necessarily having to feel them first.
Yeah, I'm rambling.
Conclusion: This was really good.
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ohhhmyyyygoshhh.
-there's a dotted and
dashed line separating our boundaries
and they are clearly written
in invisible ink in your eyes.
our eyes align and
she wouldn't like this
wow. you just said it all right there. mind if i save this to my computer? baha
this is exactly how i feel♥
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laughoutloud.
I just write how it happens, oddly enough.
: P
Sure, fine with me.
I'm glad you liked it(:
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ahh.
this is amazing
and incredible.
I love the flow and the realness of it.
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