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Eye to eye, toe to toe,
You sleep, and I smile

Of all the beautiful things
In life I’ve been blessed to see,
None will ever compare
To the face laying on my pillow

Cheek to cheek, hand in hand
We walk step by step

We’ll see all there is to see
If we have to walk the miles by foot,
Never knowing the destination
Just enjoying the companionship

Eye to eye, toe to toe,
You sleep and I wake

Looking across the bed
My eyes lay only on tan painted walls
A tear wells up and I know
The salty taste of reality yet again

Dream of pain, wake to find no wound
Dream of love, start the day with an ache


Life Unknown
Alexander

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  • View From the Top
    September 17

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    Alex, this is a wonderful poem. Wonderful, but sad. I can tell there is a lot of emotion put into this piece, and I'm so sorry for heartache! If anything good can come of it, you're making gorgeous poetry with the pain...so for that perhaps, you can be thankful?
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  • Angelflower
    February 5

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    oh this was really emotional!! i loved the flow and the story you weaved what seemed so easily!!! I really loved it.. thank you very much for sharing.

    Angel