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My Mistakes

These are my mistakes
You must forgive them,
As I am only human
I am not immortal and I do bleed.

If you cut me I bleed a red a river
These mistakes,
Can cut thought my heart and soul
These mistakes are mine to make.

These are my mistakes
I have many collected in an album,
To remind me I am human
And not dead yet.

I am human not perfect
I am made up of,
Bone, tissue, muscle and blood
I have many mistakes.

And this I am sure will be a tradition
More mistakes will be continued to be collected,
And I will continue to be human
And I will continue to make my mistakes.

And some how and some way I know
My mistakes will always lead me to bleeding 
That red river.

These are my mistakes
You must forgive them
As I am only human.

Author notes

This is the poem I came up with from the inspration from these.

"Forgive me my mistakes,
I'm only human-
I bleed just like you..."
-Human by Assemblage 23.

This is also my first poem and contest of 2009 Yay.
Hope everyone enjoys this poem and I hope everyones 2009 is going okay so far.
Blessings Firewitch

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