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Waltzing with the man on the moon


"In the arms of an angel..." I found heaven.
I could say so much more but don't feel the need.
I've said it all before...
I fell in love that night alone with him,
just the two of us beneath the stars.
There was snow on the ground and icicles
hung like tiny chandeliers from the rooftops.
But, I never felt the cold.
His kisses melted my heart, the way his hands felt
as they traced little lines on my skin.
My very soul flew away that night and
for a moment
I was waltzing with the man on the moon.
And it was perfect.


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  • Paloszoo gold member
    January 27

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    Love it! The imagery is fantastic. Thanks for entering my contest. I'm always honored when someone takes the time to write for me.


  • BonnieQ silver member
    January 22

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    Gorgeous Imagery

    This is exquisitely written. The imagery is magical, rhythm and flow musical, and very very romantic. Would that we all have such a splendid memory! Best wishes, poet.

    Luv in Christ, BonnieQ


  • Sandygram
    January 20
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    This is very warm and romantic. A delight to read. Best of luck. Take care, Sandy


  • Guerrero
    January 20
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    Wow. Really good! Beautiful as always mama


  • Denerica
    January 20

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    Beautiful words and romantic...days that feel long gone and longed for, you captured that very essence, loved the visual. Blessings.

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