I am so sick
So twisted
Horny and abused
Another pint of nothing
I cut myself
And masturbate
In the blood
Another pint of crazy pleasure
I watch babies burn
And laugh at them
As they melt to nothing
Another pint of insides
I thrust myself into you
You moan so loud
I fuck so good
Another pint of sperm
Another pint of poison
Another pint of you
Author notes
Now, just so all of you know; none of those extreme statements are true. I was just sitting in class and the words came into my head so I just wrote them down. I dont masturbate in blood or watch babies burn or anything of that nature.
A contest entry
- Show us how odd you are! by Noir mariposa...x.
1750 points, ended March 17, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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That is really creepy >.<
Not sure if its really odd but *shrugs* Who am I to say
thank you for entering,
i wish you the best of luck
Claire x -
It's so incredibly beautiful... it is quite a juxtaposition because the use of words so elegantly contradicts what is actually being said. You read it and feel it, but it repulses at the same time. It left me with a beautiful feeling of satisfaction... Definitely one of the best poems I've read on allpoetry.
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Well, thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it so much
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this is good. a little scary, but thats just what a human mind is. fucking scarier than shit! but the poem is kickass! i love it, i love how you can be so free with your words and how you can really make someone feel uncomforted (one of my friends read yur poems, she said yur a freak, but she's just a prep) anyways, i love how you write, don't ever change!
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HAHA, yeah...I can see how preps wouldn't like what I write Yeah, this one (I could see) how it is views as scary,haha. Don't worry, I shall never change how I write
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